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She was in her best attire. Her scent was irresistible. 
Eagerly, her eyes scanned the distance, waiting for him.
His kiss. She’d waited all Spring.
Closer and closer he came and flitted right past her, settling on another, two rows away.
Her heart of petals burst as the butterfly flew away, having drunk his fill.
This is written in response to the theme prompt ‘ That tender kiss’ 
for the week of 55-word posts over at 
Marathon Bloggers 

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Categories: Fiction

Uma · January 22, 2014 at 4:49 am

So sweet..even I thought of a kiss between a honey bee and a flower..:-)

Mama - Mia · January 22, 2014 at 5:17 am

beyootiful! 🙂

tulika singh · January 22, 2014 at 6:39 am

Yeah will echo Mama Mia… beyootifull it is Shailaja. This is inspired writing.

monikamanchanda · January 22, 2014 at 7:59 am

lovely this is, so beautiful

Pushpa Moorjani · January 22, 2014 at 8:30 am

loved reading it several times 🙂

Pallavi Purani · January 22, 2014 at 8:44 am

Aaah nature <3

Shailaja V · January 22, 2014 at 9:40 am

Thank you Uma 🙂

Shailaja V · January 22, 2014 at 9:41 am

Glad you think so, Abha 🙂

Shailaja V · January 22, 2014 at 9:43 am

Tulika, you make me blush 🙂

Shailaja V · January 22, 2014 at 9:44 am

Thanks Monika!

Shailaja V · January 22, 2014 at 9:48 am

That really warms my heart, to hear you say that 🙂

Shailaja V · January 22, 2014 at 9:50 am

The best inspiration, isn't it? 🙂

Aparna · January 22, 2014 at 5:44 pm

Loving the different viewpoints on a kiss ;). And I was wondering if you were going for 10_10_10_10_5 when I read the first couple of lines :).

Shailaja V · January 22, 2014 at 5:50 pm

Now that's a great idea! Need to see if I can do it once during the week 🙂

Priya Mani · January 22, 2014 at 7:14 pm

The next time I see a butterfly on a flower, I will think of this post :))) So delightful. Never thought of a kiss that way…Wow!

Shailaja V · January 23, 2014 at 4:53 pm

Thank you Priya 🙂

Debapriya · May 20, 2014 at 6:36 pm

Wish, it had continued… lovely Shailaja!! Keep going

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