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ย Just as I was leaving, I heard it. A tiny voice whimpered, ‘We’re too late. He’s going away!’

There she was, all of six, standing at the water’s edge,next to her mom.

The moon said, ‘Go ahead, take a few more minutes ‘.

Beaming, I glowed warmly and set on the dusky horizon.

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This is written in response to the theme prompt ‘ Just as I was leaving’ for the week of 55-word posts over atย 
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cynk · January 21, 2014 at 3:26 am

Oh, lovely!

Shailaja V · January 21, 2014 at 3:44 am

Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

Mama - Mia · January 21, 2014 at 6:09 am

๐Ÿ™‚ sigh! ๐Ÿ™‚

Uma · January 21, 2014 at 6:23 am

how lovely!…very creative, Shailaja ๐Ÿ™‚

Pallavi Purani · January 21, 2014 at 7:10 am

Brilliant words.

Shailaja V · January 21, 2014 at 7:43 am

Thanks for reading, Abha ๐Ÿ™‚

Shailaja V · January 21, 2014 at 7:44 am

Thanks Uma! *blushes with joy*

Shailaja V · January 21, 2014 at 7:45 am

You're so sweet to say so. Thank you!

Aparna · January 21, 2014 at 7:51 am

I thought the first one was great, and now this is better ;). Where are you heading to by the end of the week I wonder? :).

Pushpa Moorjani · January 21, 2014 at 8:02 am

lovely!

Shailaja V · January 21, 2014 at 8:07 am

You always bring a smile to my face ๐Ÿ™‚ Thanks. The week? Hope it ends well ๐Ÿ˜‰

Shailaja V · January 21, 2014 at 8:10 am

Thanks Pushpa ๐Ÿ™‚

tulika singh · January 21, 2014 at 8:18 am

That was amazingly creative. Totally loved it.

Shailaja V · January 21, 2014 at 8:21 am

Awww, now I have to say that you're too generous with your compliments. Big hugs ๐Ÿ™‚

monikamanchanda · January 21, 2014 at 12:23 pm

beautiful

Shailaja V · January 22, 2014 at 7:09 am

Thank you Monika, for the comment and for starting this 55-word week. Loving the experience!

Vidya Lohith · January 22, 2014 at 1:00 pm

How sweet ๐Ÿ™‚

Shailaja V · January 22, 2014 at 4:43 pm

Thanks Vidya ๐Ÿ™‚

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