Making it whole

Making it whole

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Tearfully, she looked at the ruins before her. Her heart crumbled under the weight of the pain.

She tried to put the pieces back together, but the effort was too much for her. She looked at the perpetrator who grinned. She howled in anger and helplessness.

Soft footsteps came up behind her. Warm kisses touched her cheek and strong hands lifted her up. She turned and sobbed into the firm shoulder. He gently lowered her,sat and put the broken toy back together.

Incredibly, she felt her heart begin to heal. She even turned and smiled at her little brother.

Word count:100


This is written in response to Write Tribe’s 100 Words on Saturday 2014-9

The prompt for this Saturday was 

 ‘she felt her heart begin to heal’

For more short 100-word posts or to write one of your own , click on the link above!

100 Words on Saturday - Write Tribe

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0 thoughts on “Making it whole

  1. Awww!!!! Reminds me of my brother's atrocities when he was little, the chief of which was snapping my brand new Barbie doll's head off her neck. And yes, he's studying to become a surgeon now 🙂

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