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She was too late
They said
There was nothing they could do
He said

I refuse to believe that
She said
But it’s the truth
They said

You have to let it go
He said
And watch my life crumble?
She said

What else can we do?
They said
I want justice
She said

But it’s past midnight
They said
Wake him up now!
She said

Fine, let’s go
He said
Let’s ring the doorbell
They said

Yes, can I help you?
Said a soft voice
We need to see the culprit
She said grimly

But…it’s really late. He’s asleep
Protested the voice
I don’t care!
She said

Then a head poked out
Shivering and scared
I am really sorry, I am
he whimpered

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Steely eyes and a glare welcomed him
You shouldn’t have done it! She was my friend!
She uttered through clenched teeth

I will make it up to you, I promise
He whispered

Towering over him.
With anger thrashing about in her heart
She said
I was too late to save her.
And you will never find another cat quite like her. . .

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This is written in response to the Wednesday Prompt over at

This week’s prompt was to use the line ‘S/he was too late” anywhere in the post
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Categories: Fiction

Carol Graham · February 20, 2014 at 12:24 am

Aww,… you touched my heart. Loved your story/poem.

Rajlakshmi · February 20, 2014 at 2:46 am

Aww poor cat… Nice write

Nabanita · February 20, 2014 at 2:56 am

ohhh that was nice :)poor cat!

Shailaja V · February 20, 2014 at 4:40 am

Thanks Carol 🙂

Shailaja V · February 20, 2014 at 4:41 am

Thanks Rajlakshmi!

Shailaja V · February 20, 2014 at 4:41 am

Love how prompt you are with the comments! Thanks Naba 🙂

Midnight scribbles · February 20, 2014 at 6:47 am

Aw dang. Nothing replaces cats as companions . they're a furry mess of love 🙂

tulika singh · February 20, 2014 at 7:13 am

A cat… guess one would miss them.

iamstri · February 20, 2014 at 7:28 am

A neat and perfect take on the prompt 🙂

Shailaja V · February 20, 2014 at 7:35 am

This was inspired by a friend of mine, who got really attached to a stray cat and was heartbroken to see it taken away by the authorities.

Shailaja V · February 20, 2014 at 7:36 am

Not a 'pet' person, per se. But this is where the prompt led me 😀

Shailaja V · February 20, 2014 at 7:36 am

Thank you so much 🙂

Kalpana Solsi · February 20, 2014 at 6:07 pm

Loved your story in the form of poem. Oh the cat!

Shailaja V · February 20, 2014 at 6:09 pm

Ah yes, the cat! I don't know why I chose the cat, really. Just the idea of a dead cat emerged when I saw this prompt 🙂 Thanks Kalpana 🙂

Psych Babbler · February 21, 2014 at 1:42 am

🙁 That's sad…I kept thinking of my two kitties and trust me, if someone ever tries to hurt them, they are going to be in a lot of physical pain! Nicely penned…

Shailaja V · February 21, 2014 at 3:44 am

Psych, I can imagine! How people can bring themselves to harm other creatures, wilfully, is beyond me!

dreamzandclouds · February 21, 2014 at 12:58 pm

Nice one…..love it! 🙂
Mine is here – http://wp.me/p2Aqoq-oS

sulekkha · February 21, 2014 at 1:52 pm

I have a pet Dalmatian so I know how attached we are to our pets, great take on the prompt.

vishalbheeroo · February 21, 2014 at 4:01 pm

Magnificent and heart warming poem on the love for pets who are part of our lives. Lil' do we forget they have a soul and a heart capable of love:)

Michelle Liew · February 21, 2014 at 4:40 pm

Yes, animals are as important as humans. Well said!

Usha Menon · February 22, 2014 at 2:49 pm

A very touching story narrated poetically ! Loved it.

Shailaja V · February 22, 2014 at 6:06 pm

Thank you Usha 🙂

Shailaja V · February 22, 2014 at 6:06 pm

Yes, they are, Michelle. But,few seem to understand that…

Shailaja V · February 22, 2014 at 6:07 pm

Thanks Vishal. It is heartbreaking when I see pictures of mistreated animals.

Shailaja V · February 22, 2014 at 6:07 pm

I like Dalmatians. They are so majestic! Thanks Sulekka!

Shailaja V · February 22, 2014 at 6:08 pm

Thanks! I finally managed to read yours. Will comment again!

dxbnidblog · February 24, 2014 at 2:06 pm

god i really thought u were talking of some person.that was really a surprise.not a single less emotion for a cat. flawless.

Rohan Kachalia · February 25, 2014 at 12:05 pm

A nice story told through a poem.. liked it 🙂 we forget that even animals need to be loved and cared for..

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Shailaja V · February 25, 2014 at 12:43 pm

Thanks for visiting, Rohan! Glad you liked the poem 🙂

Shailaja V · February 25, 2014 at 12:50 pm

Thank you! Happy that the suspense held you till the end 🙂

Vaisakh Venugopal · February 28, 2014 at 1:57 pm

Cats are lovely yet pompous pets.. But yeah, I've felt this pain when a cute little furball of a kitten met a sad end..nice poem..

Shailaja V · February 28, 2014 at 4:22 pm

Yes, why is it that they actually look superior to us? 😀 Thanks for the compliment !

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