The burden~ Fiction (100 words)

The burden~ Fiction (100 words)

The harsh rays of the sun beat down on her as she stood on the pavement, watching the steady stream of cars go by. Her worn hands gripped the bowl in one hand and a weak child in the other. The child’s eyes rolled back in its head.

Don’t get attached. Her employer’s voice echoed in her head. 
Just use the kid. Let’s make do with what we get.

Steeling her heart and thinking of her own survival, she trudged towards the cars at the intersection. All the while, her conditional love for the child weighed heavily on her mind.

Photo Copyright: Jorge Royan

Word count:100


This is a combined post written in response to two prompts:

Write Tribe’s Wednesday prompt 2014- 12

The prompts for this Wednesday and Saturday were

“Use it up, wear it out, make it do or do without” 

“conditional love”

For more short 100-word posts or to write one of your own , click on the links above!
100 Words on Saturday - Write Tribe

Also linking this to the Ultimate Blog Challenge for April


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0 thoughts on “The burden~ Fiction (100 words)

  1. Though short in 100 words,it was a heavy post and left me pondering at the cruelty of poverty.This story will come to my mind whenever I wait at the signal for it to turn green

  2. You have captured so well a reality that is so often simply ignored by us, the privileged ones. Thank you!
    And nice how you combined the two prompts. Very well done!

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